Character Application: Galagron Smokestone

[Galagron Smokestone]

Name: Galagron Smokestone
Age: 12
Year: 1st Year
Gender: Male
Hogwarts House: Hufflepuff
Blood Status: Pureblood
Wand: My wand is 12 3/4 inches long. It is made of Yew and has a core of Veela hair. It's strength is in Defense.
Pets:
Physical Characteristics:

Galagron Smokestone is a tall young boy with jet black hair and green eyes. He has a birthmark in the shape of a lightning bolt on his right arm near his shoulder.

Character Biography:

Galagron Smokestone was born to a well-to-do wizard family. After many friendships between the Smokestone family and the Muggle world, Smokestone's father, Bellator, had taken to assuming the mannerisms of a Victorian Englishman - refined, cool, strong-willed, and ever-so slightly pompous.

He has made every endeavor to instill these qualities in young Galagron, succeeding in certain ways. But through the veneer of sophistication and gentleman like flair, the usual Smokestone eccentricity shines through. This often comes across to others as dim-witted, but Galagron is incredibly kind, well-intentioned, brave, and witty.

Sometimes, he simply seems to be 'not of this world'. However, looks can be deceiving.

Additional Info:

[Prof. James Coppergold]

It sounds as though you're describing Harry Potter. Only you don't have classes and your scar is on your shoulder not your forehead. This is just a little too close to canon for me. Please change it.